November 6, 2007

Something I wrote……. more than a year ago

Filed under: life — Tags: , , , , , , , , , — syedfaisal @ 12:49 pm

  The world I live in,
  Shining like the sun,
  Burning in the fire,
  Dying hopes and living desires,
  The way I have been with the dreams unseen,
  Walking alone,
  With fears in my eyes,
  No where to run and no where to hide,
  Tempest in my mind,
  Tears of the red and aim of the blue,
  All the hallucinations! Can they be true?,
  With all my efforts summing to zero,
  Betraying myself,
  My own unwanted being,
  With all these thoughts,
  Suddenly I look up on the skies,
  Saving myself falling in oblivion,
  Bowing myself in front of “The Lord”,
  With rising hopes,
  And searing passion to win,
  Collecting myself with resolve stronger,
  Ahead is the world I have to conquer.

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  1. I had no idea you wrote poetry(you think you know someone!)..anyway that was really good.

    Comment by mjkfever — November 29, 2007 @ 1:54 pm

  2. @Jahanzeb
    thats wot u call SURPRISE……..

    Comment by syedfaisal — November 30, 2007 @ 1:06 pm

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